'Graveyard Gang' character review

Hi there! Graveyard Gang is a story/possible comic that I'm writing, so I thought I could make a little character review.

Characters:
^
Marian Josephs /(that's suposed to be a arrow) (well, something
like that....lol! I'm
not very good @
paint. lolz)

Marian Josephs was never a girl who made friends easily, but when she moved to small town Glendale, things got worse. She was the only 8th grade in the entire school and towered over her sixth and seventh grade classmates. Two weeks later, she finally starts making friends, but they all share a common flaw....
--they're all dead.--
Marian meets her new (and first) best friend the mysterious skeleton-girl, Susan Kelly, on a classic dark and foggy night. Marian's friends also include Mary Hale --a haint--, Boone Montgumery (nicknamed "Boo")--a poltergeist-in-training-- and Gualterio Giordano (who was given a much more easier to pronounce name ,'Ghoul') --an Italian zombie.


Much more to come!!!!!
Though, I might not have pictures for everyone.... sorry!


School starts tomarrow! Zomg!
~Minx